I think that everything composed was very logical.
However, what about this? suppose you typed a
catchier post title? I mean, I don't wish to tell you how
to run your blog, however what if you added a title
that grabbed a person's attention? I mean 奥の院参り 横山不動尊 - イベント is a little
boring. You should peek at Yahoo's home page and see how they create
post titles to grab people to open the links.
You might add a video or a related picture or two to get readers interested
about what you've written. In my opinion, it would make your posts a little
bit more interesting.